Hi i am here again.I am going to tell you about mi anecdote in San Andres with my family:
When I was in San Andres with my mom, my cousin, one friend of my mom, and my anti we went to a gorgeous hotel that has little ships and a natural pool. Then when we were in the shops my mom bought a snorkel to my cousin and me. When we arrive to the hotel the friend of my mom said “ok, we are going to go to the natural pool” when we arrived to the natural pool and I proof the snorkels I saw a porcupine pig and I named Bobby. In all the places the people and the tourists said to me in all the languages “can we take a photo with it” and I said “sure”
When I was in San Andres with my mom, my cousin, one friend of my mom, and my anti we went to a gorgeous hotel that has little ships and a natural pool. Then when we were in the shops my mom bought a snorkel to my cousin and me. When we arrive to the hotel the friend of my mom said “ok, we are going to go to the natural pool” when we arrived to the natural pool and I proof the snorkels I saw a porcupine pig and I named Bobby. In all the places the people and the tourists said to me in all the languages “can we take a photo with it” and I said “sure”
hi andre i liked your anecdote i think it is very nice but it is a bit short but no prob it has some sp and i like san andres to.
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Andreitaaaa, Nice anecdote, clear and well structure. Nevertheless, try to put more punctuation marks to your text and try to make it longer. Nice photo, and very nice anecdote.
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Remember it is not anti it is aunt.
You had some conjugation mistakes in your anectode.
the text its a bit incohoerent, also you say the topic inmideatly try saying more things about it to make it better.
ReplyDeleteandre good text it see very funny and very delicious go there, good text i like it very much
ReplyDeleteboni anti means (ti-ita)
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